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Harbinger PC Early Access Feedback

  • Offline Lurkily
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01-30-2016, 04:27 AM

In the wanderer's story pane - "Time has shaped us ruthless . . . " Time has shaped us ruthlessly. Or ruthlessly shaped us, which requires fewer commas in a three-comma sentence.

Also, fall prey, not pray. Pray is for the religious sense.

In the mission pane, "Find the Wanderers mothership." Needs an apostrophe. The Wanderer's mothership. Or if the name of their race is "Wanderers" even in the singular, perhaps the Wanderers' mothership. (Style guides disagree there.)

"May your upcoming battles be Victorius!" Victorious.
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Harbinger PC Early Access Feedback - by Lurkily - 12-16-2015, 01:52 PM
Harbinger PC Early Access Feedback - by Lurkily - 12-16-2015, 02:25 PM
Harbinger PC Early Access Feedback - by Lurkily - 12-16-2015, 03:49 PM
Harbinger PC Early Access Feedback - by steph - 12-17-2015, 10:45 AM
Harbinger PC Early Access Feedback - by Duraxx - 12-17-2015, 04:51 PM
Harbinger PC Early Access Feedback - by Lurkily - 12-18-2015, 02:07 AM
Harbinger PC Early Access Feedback - by Lurkily - 12-18-2015, 03:39 AM
Harbinger PC Early Access Feedback - by Latios111 - 12-18-2015, 02:51 PM
Harbinger PC Early Access Feedback - by Jarmo - 12-23-2015, 02:23 PM
Harbinger PC Early Access Feedback - by Lurkily - 12-27-2015, 12:35 PM
Harbinger PC Early Access Feedback - by Lurkily - 01-16-2016, 01:50 AM
Harbinger PC Early Access Feedback - by Lurkily - 01-16-2016, 01:51 AM
Harbinger PC Early Access Feedback - by Lurkily - 01-16-2016, 02:13 AM
Harbinger PC Early Access Feedback - by Lurkily - 01-16-2016, 02:34 AM
Harbinger PC Early Access Feedback - by steph - 01-16-2016, 03:13 PM
Harbinger PC Early Access Feedback - by Lurkily - 01-17-2016, 01:50 AM
Harbinger PC Early Access Feedback - by x2ruff4u - 01-22-2016, 04:07 PM
Harbinger PC Early Access Feedback - by Lurkily - 01-23-2016, 03:24 AM
Harbinger PC Early Access Feedback - by Lurkily - 01-23-2016, 03:32 AM
Harbinger PC Early Access Feedback - by Fruitn - 01-23-2016, 07:14 PM
Harbinger PC Early Access Feedback - by Fruitn - 01-23-2016, 08:04 PM
Harbinger PC Early Access Feedback - by Fruitn - 01-23-2016, 08:38 PM
Harbinger PC Early Access Feedback - by Teraphim - 01-24-2016, 07:38 AM
Harbinger PC Early Access Feedback - by dmsnarf - 01-24-2016, 05:22 PM
Harbinger PC Early Access Feedback - by dmsnarf - 01-25-2016, 03:43 PM
Harbinger PC Early Access Feedback - by dmsnarf - 01-25-2016, 05:15 PM
Harbinger PC Early Access Feedback - by Fruitn - 01-26-2016, 09:38 AM
Harbinger PC Early Access Feedback - by Fruitn - 01-26-2016, 09:40 AM
Harbinger PC Early Access Feedback - by Lurkily - 01-26-2016, 06:48 PM
Harbinger PC Early Access Feedback - by Fruitn - 01-27-2016, 12:16 PM
Harbinger PC Early Access Feedback - by Lurkily - 01-30-2016, 02:30 AM
Harbinger PC Early Access Feedback - by Lurkily - 01-30-2016, 04:09 AM
Harbinger PC Early Access Feedback - by Lurkily - 01-30-2016, 04:27 AM
Harbinger PC Early Access Feedback - by Lurkily - 01-30-2016, 04:44 AM
Harbinger PC Early Access Feedback - by noncom - 01-30-2016, 07:14 PM
Harbinger PC Early Access Feedback - by MIchaelR - 01-31-2016, 01:37 AM
Harbinger PC Early Access Feedback - by Lurkily - 02-01-2016, 04:32 AM
Harbinger PC Early Access Feedback - by Jarmo - 02-09-2016, 08:21 PM
Harbinger PC Early Access Feedback - by Scott - 02-09-2016, 11:36 PM
Harbinger PC Early Access Feedback - by Azhrei - 02-24-2016, 06:05 PM
Harbinger PC Early Access Feedback - by Azhrei - 02-25-2016, 08:03 AM
Harbinger PC Early Access Feedback - by Azhrei - 02-25-2016, 08:05 AM
Harbinger PC Early Access Feedback - by steph - 02-26-2016, 10:05 AM



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